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little something i wrote

 
 
TaraD
 
Reply Wed 7 Jan, 2009 05:29 am




May my lips touch your sweet lips?
May my eyes gaze into yours forever?
May my fingertips feel the touch of yours?
May my hands lock with yours as if to lock our very souls?
May my arms hold you & as they do melt the world around us & all our troubles disappear?
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Catchabula
 
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Reply Wed 7 Jan, 2009 01:02 pm
@TaraD,
No insult intended, and no perversion either, but I imagined the person who is saying this Very Young, and it adds. Are they still alive, those pervs of yore? David Hamilton, Irina Ionesco...? This poem felt like a wet kiss of my niece, she had her first bra recently. Yes, sheer beauty. Thanks!
TaraD
 
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Reply Wed 7 Jan, 2009 05:14 pm
@Catchabula,
maybe I should take this down
Catchabula
 
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Reply Wed 7 Jan, 2009 05:37 pm
@TaraD,
Do you consider to take away from here this wonderful sensual loving warm... ? If you try I'll complain with the UN! Guess I wasn't clear: I like it a lot. Yes, the Art of Love...
Justin
 
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Reply Wed 7 Jan, 2009 05:45 pm
@TaraD,
Thank you for sharing!
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TaraD
 
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Reply Wed 7 Jan, 2009 07:12 pm
@Catchabula,
Catchabula wrote:
Do you consider to take away from here this wonderful sensual loving warm... ? If you try I'll complain with the UN! Guess I wasn't clear: I like it a lot. Yes, the Art of Love...



Thank you Smile You made me laugh which I needed today :bigsmile:
Joe
 
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Reply Thu 8 Jan, 2009 04:33 am
@TaraD,
the last line makes me wanna reminisce. anticipation and all.
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