xris
 
Reply Sat 26 Sep, 2009 04:01 am
Not that good at poetry but for Caroline's sake Ive tried.

A delicate flower in our presence did bloom
Precious to our excluding gloom
We saw its presence it did inspire
Then like fools we did conspire
Oh too eager to announce
Then by common agent did denounce
Caused the bloom to fade and wilt
shall we see its beauty return or guilt.
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josh0335
 
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Reply Sat 26 Sep, 2009 07:16 am
@xris,
That's really nice. Erm, has something happened to Caroline?
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Caroline
 
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Reply Sat 10 Oct, 2009 11:26 am
@xris,
No im still here thanks. Um xris what does the last line mean, i mean im sorry for the upset I caused, I've been under a lot of pressure with hardly enough support but im ok now, Justin was right to demote me, I em needed a break and I quite like being just a member, girls got to live right? But I do miss the all of the team. Thanks xris I will treasure the poem, it's lovely you're a real star. xxx
xris
 
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Reply Sat 10 Oct, 2009 01:23 pm
@Caroline,
Your welcome Caroline, i could never moderate others, i would fail miserably. The last line meant if you did not return we would all be overcome with guilt for not being a little more understanding of your position. I dont think anyone feels anything but love and admiration for your attempt at controlling such a manic bunch of hardened fools. Nice to see you back.. luv xris.
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Caroline
 
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Reply Sat 10 Oct, 2009 01:32 pm
@xris,
Xris words fail me, thank you so much, I can't tell you how much that means to me, thank you sir, I really appreciate it, forever your friend Caroline. xxxxxxxx
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