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Letty
 
Reply Mon 10 Nov, 2003 08:02 pm
Silent as your picture.
A candle and a flicker
That paints shadows and silhouettes
In profile.

Your left side is better..
Your right side is wetter
Because the colors run
And blend and never end
In suffusion of full face
And smiling,
Forever beguiling.

I am no longer invisible.
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pieman
 
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Reply Tue 11 Nov, 2003 02:14 pm
Hi Letty. I enjoy your poetry. I find it beguiling .... in the positive sense of the word.
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Letty
 
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Reply Tue 11 Nov, 2003 02:20 pm
Thank you, Ontario. Always nice to receive accolades from way up North. Smile and may I say you ain't no simple simon, pieman. I enjoy reading you, too.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Tue 11 Nov, 2003 06:56 pm
Cleverly done, a neat read. Thank you, letty.
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Letty
 
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Reply Tue 11 Nov, 2003 06:58 pm
<smile> Hi, edgar. Have we met before? Thank you, my friend.
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