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If Tomorrow Arrives

 
 
Reply Thu 24 Sep, 2009 02:54 pm
If Tomorrow Arrives

If you deplete your happiness today, what is left for tomorrow?

Suffice the colours of the sunset sky
The white horses become shadows engulfed in dusk of a torchless horizon
Yet here we sit and accompany the companions of the dirt
They long crossed the barrier to a timeless space
Beyond the scent of crisp leaves Angels interrogate
Know that colours do not perish in the night, they merely sleep!
Rejoice the soul of the believer whom Angels meet
For colours under the sky are but echoes of colours in the heart
Oh happiness replenish if tomorrow arrives
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GoshisDead
 
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Reply Thu 24 Sep, 2009 03:11 pm
@josh0335,
I really Enjoyed that. Thanks. So sad, as if everyone is alotted only a little happiness.
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Catchabula
 
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Reply Thu 24 Sep, 2009 04:05 pm
@josh0335,
What can I say that would not soil your words? Perhaps just this: waw!
josh0335
 
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Reply Fri 25 Sep, 2009 11:44 am
@Catchabula,
Thanks guys, glad you liked it.
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Caroline
 
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Reply Sat 10 Oct, 2009 01:44 pm
@josh0335,
Well tomorrow has arrived. Thanks for posting Josh, you got a spark for poetry I see, very nice, it's lovely. Wink
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