Reply Wed 19 Nov, 2008 08:30 am
Completeness

Persuaded they were of searching,
Their completion in order to find,
But they should not at all mind,
For completed from birth is mankind.


Fearless

All strange things used to fill them with fear,
But all they needed was bringing them near,
For what they had only to see,
How familiar the strangest of things can really be.


Time

Creation and decay,
Have showed them the way,
To what does not fade away,
To the one and the whole that is complete,
That all seen or unseen is part of it.
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Reply Thu 20 Nov, 2008 02:46 pm
@diamantis,
fun! but if I could offer some advice change ' How familiar the strangest of things can really be.' into 'How familiar the strangest of things really can be' It has a better rythm that way.
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Reply Fri 27 Mar, 2009 04:22 am
@diamantis,
Anxious


Antithesis is not creative, a

Novelty is not made by

Xerox, to

Improvise is everything not meant to be

Official, is only an

Unwonted

Stroke




Isolation


Irresolute of how to obtain

Safety, is an

Orgasm of

Liberty, than the

Authority of

Time,

Intelligent is not

Other than

Natural



Obstruct


Obtain only what enables to

Breathe, taking up the

Slack, every

Test, gives a mind

Reflex, to

Understand, the

Cycle of

Thinking
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