Reply Wed 29 Oct, 2008 07:41 am
The whole,
That is complete,
I am a part,
Everything we can see is a part,
The space we hold and between us is a part,
We cannot become apart,
We belong on the whole,
On what is complete.
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Reply Wed 29 Oct, 2008 08:33 am
@diamantis,
diamantis,Smile


So true, but, we really cannot precieve the whole, just intuit a totality, for all systems are open systems, even the universe is not known to be closed.
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Reply Sat 1 Nov, 2008 02:09 pm
@diamantis,
Very nice work!

Loved it!

-BaC

Its where your "whole" "lye" my son...

-BaC
Where are you 're bound(s)? Wink

boagie wrote:
diamantis,Smile


So true, but, we really cannot precieve the whole, just intuit a totality, for all systems are open systems, even the universe is not known to be closed.
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