Solace
 
Reply Tue 24 Nov, 2009 08:52 pm
What lies beneath is debated, this is then the idealist's plea
To endure that law outdated, which demands that I should take up thee
Is this that for which I was fated, to hang upon a zealot's tree?
My guilt is already stated, these chains are all that make up me
All I have is all I hated, and all I know is your jealousy
The abyss of the eye is sated, and I only want to wake up free.
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salima
 
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Reply Wed 25 Nov, 2009 07:52 am
@Solace,
that's really good. now i have to go back into the archives and see if you have posted anything else...
Solace
 
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Reply Wed 25 Nov, 2009 08:59 am
@salima,
Ty salima. To save you the trouble of looking, I haven't posted anything else in this section.
salima
 
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Reply Wed 25 Nov, 2009 11:17 am
@Solace,
Solace;105832 wrote:
Ty salima. To save you the trouble of looking, I haven't posted anything else in this section.


i do hope you will in the future.
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