Khethil
 
Reply Sat 12 Sep, 2009 05:15 pm
Friends Gone Past

[INDENT]It's the reminiscence of a time gone past
Pride of a realm long dust

The maturity and solace gained
Strength felt and soothed

So bask, in the warmth of having known
And having been known

And it finally came.
The place where good no longer stands in the shadow of bad

They'll join the others.
Sealed, frozen in time;
In a corner of my heart[/INDENT]
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Caroline
 
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Reply Sat 10 Oct, 2009 02:28 pm
@Khethil,
This is bang on Khethil.
Thanks. Smile

---------- Post added 10-10-2009 at 03:29 PM ----------

I would change it to the bottom of my heart mate.
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