Reply Sun 20 Apr, 2008 05:03 pm
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Spirited hallucination
You had it in your hands;
Synthetic rainbow
You saw it rising, and
While I wandered out on the moor for days,
You reached for the stars and prayed.

Material possession
Rendered with a brush and a stick;
You cut through the lies,
Manifest inspiration flying with a flick,
The result in pieces four days in the making
A wonder of colors, a deep undertaking.

Fabricated dichotomy
Widespread by the legions;
Counterfeit stories
Invented afflictions,
Belief flounders, spluttering and mourning
Followers they come dancing.

Volatile the addictions
Striking hammers on complexions;
Compulsive habits
Preconception of ecstasy livid and live,
Verging on the debauched, intoxicated high
Approaching destiny of ill health or insight.

Disco steps continuously
Soft shoes on a hard floor;
Hyper buzz in time
Tripping on pirouettes,
Shimmering twirls count the beats rocking out
Bounce and sway, music devout.

Shivering sojourns on streets
Rain on bus windows, steam drawings;
Feverish rambling
Toward warm homes, rooms and relaxed conversation,
Lasting memories, and days still not forgotten
Timeless adventures those repetitive crazed scenes.

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Reply Sun 20 Apr, 2008 05:05 pm
@Doobah47,
I have an obsession with poetic meter combined with mathematical calculation, so here's what I totted up whilst drunk and high:

A B C B D E
E A C F F F


A 8
B 6
C 5
D 10
E 7
F 12

8 6 5 6 10 7 42 a 3a = 126
7 8 5 12 12 12 56 b 3b = 168

42 x 56 = 2352 = 13 = 4

8 x 6 x 5 x 6 x 10 x 7 = 100800
7 x 8 x 5 x 12 x 12 x 12 = 483840

100800 + 483840 = 584640 = 27 = 9
100800 x 483840 = 48771072000 = 36 = 9
4 x 8 x 7 x 7 x 1 x 7 x 2 = 21952 = 19 = 1 or 2 x 1 x 9 x 5 x 2 = 180 = 9

3a + 3b = 294 2 + 9 + 4 = 15 = 6
2 x 9 x 4 = 72 = 9
3a x 3b = 21168 2 + 1 + 1 + 6 + 8 = 18 = 9
2 x 1 x 1 x 6 x 8 = 96

100800 / 47 = 2144.68085106383
483840 / 47 = 10294.468085

2144.68085106383 + 10294.468085 = 12439.148936 = 19.31
2144.68085106383 x 10294.468085 = 22078348.5737972347 = 34.54 = 7.9
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