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Wed 29 Oct, 2003 12:57 pm
Stabbed In The Back
Your head was fraught
Your heart was chill
You wrung your hands
Your eyes where blank
Your hurt inside was acid sharp
Emotive pain
Love was burnt
Your trust was dead & stiff
He cheated in a heartless way
Had told you he was yours forever
Then dabbled with another's heart
Left evidence on his debit card
In his car & in his flat
Tears cascaded from your eyes
Lips trembled
And your shoulders heaved
He said, "It was a daft mistake
I wont repeat" he promised you
You forgave, but didn't forget
This you told me recently
Then his encore came to pass
He was a serial cheat
With yet another girl he met
Like a knife in your back
How your heart bled like a flood
A year ago I tried to warn you
Sister dear he was a leech
He'd drained you of your pride
Devoured your strength
Milked your bankbook
Victimized you heart & soul
I hope he'll think of in future times
I think he'll just shrug his shoulders
And carry on, his ego shiny bright
You should have told me of more pain
Instead you left an empty bottle by your bed
So sister dear, please sleep in peace for evermore.
You will be sorely missed
Oak man, This came right through and hit me very close. Every word you wrote is covered in the ice of hurt, and in the house of pain.
a little reality from my distant past, tho the outcome wasn't in fact her closure. Glad you found the hurt in it.
I thought so, Oak. Another real life drama with a happy ending. You must have been involved in some way. It shows through.