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Tue 28 Oct, 2003 09:06 am
WIND BLOWING/STRESS SHOWING/LIFE AND WORLD STEADILY FLOWING.
MIND SPINING/GUILT WINING/ MY EYES AND LIGHT ARE SLOWLY DIMING.
CONSTENLY CRYING/PARENTS SPYING/HOW COME MY LOVE KEEPS ON DYING.
AS I LIE/I WONDER WHY/MY DAYS JUST SEEM TO ZOOM ON BI.
Evocative. I would lose the caps and put it into proper lines. Were the spelling errors on purpose? "Zoom on bi" could mean many things, as one example.
Ok, I'm sorry, but this reminds me of the movie "Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory", when the group goes on the boat ride on the chocolate river and Willy Wonka starts getting all crazy and rhyming using the same kind of phrasing as you did.
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