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Never ending love story

 
 
Reply Tue 9 Feb, 2010 05:53 pm
Readers, I seek to engage you in this never ending love story.Add a line or some to this story, u dont have to be romantic at all cost
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adolphite
 
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Reply Tue 9 Feb, 2010 05:57 pm
I love her.more than anything i have ever loved but for all these years i kept the feeling to myself never ever mentioning it to her
Ionus
 
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Reply Tue 9 Feb, 2010 06:21 pm
@adolphite,
It was a dark and stormy night when suddenly, a shot rang out ! It was me ! I had caught her in bed with her husband. They seemed surprised to see me. As her husband grasped his chest and staggerred out of bed, knocking over the lamp, a chair, standing on the cat, tearing down the curtains, he seemed puzzled that I would shoot my own father. Mum screamed at me, "you barstard ! "

I started to think maybe I could have handled this better.
margo
 
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Reply Tue 9 Feb, 2010 08:00 pm
@Ionus,
Ionus wrote:

I started to think maybe I could have handled this better.


Probably true!
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oolongteasup
 
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Reply Tue 9 Feb, 2010 08:18 pm
@adolphite,
probably true love

a love so true that it went beyond anything

and i loved things so

there was this thing i had for this thing once and i kept the feeling

to myself

i never ever mentioned the unmentionable

things changed when i blurted

now all i want to do is tell the world ...
adolphite
 
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Reply Wed 10 Feb, 2010 03:50 am
@oolongteasup,
but first i must admit, beauty makes such fools of us all ! This was a woman one of the sex I mistrusted and avoided, a woman in the earliest spring of her youth, a girl of fifteen or sixteen at the utmost
oolongteasup
 
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Reply Fri 12 Feb, 2010 11:26 pm
@adolphite,
Quote:
at the utmost


"are you ut" she asked pole lightly "most" i rejoindered too lishly

Quote:
beauty makes such fools of us all
she reiterated me

as no-one was more far gone beauty than i whilst she was

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a woman one of the sex I mistrusted and avoided


in short my kind of woman and the love blossomed thats what the blooming doctor said

thats as much as i remember about

the earliest spring

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