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Thu 23 Oct, 2003 10:57 pm
take the time to realize your state of mind
take the time to understand yourself
take the pills they're giving you
take the pills they're living you
understand the reasons why they're there
you will no longer cry
you will not want to die
you will not pacify yourself
sign your name
take the blame
wonder what is happening to you
live and die
wonder why
wonder why you turned the way you did
take the pills they're giving you
take the pills they'reliving you
understand the reasons why they're there
kerver wrote:untitled, any suggestions?
How bout 'There vs They're'
just joshing...hmm, what about something along the lines of Bewilderment or some such?
lol...yeah i knew i didn't use the right "there", that word still gets me everytime. please fix them if you want! So were you bewildered?
heheh...you fixed them all just right.
yes I did, just for you monger!
How about "An Accounting of Self"
..OK well it seems I've just joined the ranks of the grammar Gestapo here...Everyone who pronounces "hors d'oeuvres" as if it were marinated prostitute had better watch their backs.
hors d'oevres, huh?...
Well, the poem sounds like it'd be titled something like "Exist" or "Continue" or "Go on" or "Just live" or a mixture thereof but don't take my word for it. Anyways, I do indeed feel like some marinated prostitute myself so... WHO'S IN??? I'M BUYIN'!!!
Afterthought: What is and how do you pronounce hors d'oevres anyways?
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