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My Time of Evening..Your time of Day

 
 
Letty
 
Reply Sun 12 Oct, 2003 05:05 pm
Quietly gathering the thoughts that give way
To moments of memory
That aren't just the past,
but lyrics that linger
A smudge on a glass,
No color or texture
Just fading to black
A charcoal sketched briefly
But one that will last.
A wave of the hand will dismiss
The pain,
So drolly disguised
As the the teardrops of rain.
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Brand X
 
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Reply Sun 12 Oct, 2003 05:24 pm
Nice, Letty!
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 12 Oct, 2003 05:29 pm
BrandX, This category is feeling the dearth of response. It hurts my heart that the minds of creativity no longer meld. Thank you.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 12 Oct, 2003 05:29 pm
Smile
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 12 Oct, 2003 05:56 pm
What the hell are you laughin at, edgar. This poem was written for the boxed ears brigade. You just became a member. Evil or Very Mad Razz

for edgar of the deep and cryptic.

Mr. Pickwick? Try making me sickwick? Very Happy

Goodnight and God bless the child who has his own.
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Brand X
 
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Reply Sun 12 Oct, 2003 05:59 pm
Letty wrote:
BrandX, This category is feeling the dearth of response. It hurts my heart that the minds of creativity no longer meld. Thank you.


It's lonely, as Edgar has stolen the show. :wink:
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 12 Oct, 2003 06:01 pm
I used the wrong little face. I meant to use the one after, with the lol on it.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 12 Oct, 2003 06:06 pm
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As I have said in other threads, I all too often fail to tell other writers how much I appreciate them. You and Letty and just about every other poster in ORIGINAL WRITING are special to me. I hope you and they continue to do your good work.
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Brand X
 
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Reply Sun 12 Oct, 2003 07:01 pm
I feel the same, I enjoy reading them all too, and hope to see more here.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Mon 13 Oct, 2003 07:28 pm
Letty
I am not too swift with the little faces. I meant to convey that I like what you wrote - and I also agree with your statement on the dearth of response here. Some good writers have passed through and gone on to other things. I felt pretty discouraged over the response to some of my stuff and came close to pulling out, early on. But, I am a glutton for punishment, and I have also made enough friends on a2k that I would not consider pulling out now.
My greatest fault I guess is in failing to communicate with other posters. It is from a reticense pounded into me in childhood, more than anything else. I never overcame the outside-looking-in syndrome. Also, I hate to explain myself and what I write. I prefer to let the reader experience it in their own unique way instead of telling them what to think or feel.
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Letty
 
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Reply Mon 13 Oct, 2003 08:22 pm
edgar, good grief. You and I have been swapping poetry for some time now. I was being funny. Smile The reason that I like to get in the original writing category occasionally. is because I want some feedback just as you have given me. I need it just as we all do. Thanks, buddy
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Mon 13 Oct, 2003 08:43 pm
Very Happy Oh. Laughing
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