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I AM SO SLEEPY!!(BLAH BLAH BLAH)

 
 
Reply Sat 11 Oct, 2003 04:20 pm
My thoughts aren't "weird" they are just uncommon,

But they could serve as an ironic omen,

For what you ask? For EVERYTHING I answer,

They are my life, and they are my cancer,

So judge them, and label them, but don't forget,

I said you'd burn, Does that make me a prophet?
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Thu 16 Oct, 2003 03:22 pm
I like the idea of thoughts being both life and cancer, i.e. death.
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Child of the Light
 
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Reply Thu 16 Oct, 2003 03:39 pm
as do I
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Thu 16 Oct, 2003 03:48 pm
Did you actually write that piece while very sleepy? I find that I get much creative inspiration when almost in a dream-state.
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Child of the Light
 
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Reply Thu 16 Oct, 2003 04:01 pm
Yeah, I did. I was actually slamming the keys down and pronouncing all the words strangely. And then I came up with the title.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Thu 16 Oct, 2003 04:05 pm
Sometimes the best ideas come out that way.
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kerver
 
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Reply Thu 13 Nov, 2003 01:04 am
I like this, the phasing is great.
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