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Drinking and Driving

 
 
Lizzy
 
Reply Fri 10 Oct, 2003 04:31 pm
Will you please me for a while?
Wrap me around your finger
And make the world seem far away

Rum's scent hangs thick around you
I breathe the flavor
"Just one more drink!"
Then we'll go for a ride

The destination is known
To both of us, and we both wanna go
Upstairs, In the bed.. A kiss or two?

Sleep will be a foreign thing tonight
Laying with you. Breathing like
It's going out of style
I call your name, just awhile longer

Your touch is secure
Feeling, skin against skin
Good luck finding my clothes

I scream for you one more time
All over, spinning inside my head
You stroke the hair out of my face
To view the pleased expression

The feeling of you inside dissolves
Smoking the life-giving cancer
Wanna go for another ride?
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cicerone imposter
 
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Reply Fri 10 Oct, 2003 06:58 pm
Who'd want to drive after that?
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 12 Oct, 2003 05:41 pm
I like your way of expressing yourself.
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