edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 15 May, 2011 11:35 am
@Cyracuz,
You and jjorge constantly surprise me.
jjorge
 
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Reply Sun 15 May, 2011 12:38 pm
@edgarblythe,
Edgar, you and this thread are a treasure...
... that just keep giving!
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 15 May, 2011 12:56 pm
I wrote this one long ago, but feel it is appropriate here

like the seaman with his ayes
the winner with his prize
youve winnowed in my heart
better than whistlers art

i love you like peanut butter
and any milk giving udder
we are building something special
like a condominium big and spacial

please continue writing here
i will buy you all cyber beer
any time i ever let you down
give me a kick but not a frown
Cyracuz
 
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Reply Sun 15 May, 2011 02:18 pm
@edgarblythe,
No kicks or frowns from me, edgar. I love it here Smile
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ossobuco
 
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Reply Sun 15 May, 2011 03:24 pm
@Cyracuz,
terrific..
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jjorge
 
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Reply Sun 15 May, 2011 04:10 pm
@edgarblythe,
"...like the seaman with his ayes
the winner with his prize
youve winnowed in my heart
better than whistlers art..."

very nice! (sniff)

You are just the right host for this site edgar
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 15 May, 2011 04:21 pm
@jjorge,
Of all my literary labors, this thread has been the most satisfying. To think, a while back I was abandoning it.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 15 May, 2011 06:50 pm
a home
filled with poems
and ponderous tomes
is so comforting
and disconcerting
is the thought to roam




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jjorge
 
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Reply Tue 24 May, 2011 07:47 pm
As 'That Day' approaches'

I don't acknowledge birthdays any more,
but each year when my DOB arrives
I drink some beer -maybe three,
or maybe four or five!
and smile, because, somehow I'm still alive,

knowing that before to long I'll 'pass'
this fellow doesn't look for gifts or pelf,
instead I simply hoist my foamy glass,
and wish a happy burpday to myself.

-jjorge
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Tue 24 May, 2011 07:56 pm
Happy burpday, jjorge.
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Tue 24 May, 2011 08:13 pm
i ain't older than the mountains
they ain't older than me
north is higher than the southlands
ain't no borders for me

mountains may be turned to rubble
death can overtake me
mountains are just a big bubble
only water is me

sprinkle me over the mountains
where the eagle soars free
forever the cycle maintains
for the mountains and me



jjorge
 
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Reply Tue 24 May, 2011 09:24 pm
@edgarblythe,
Very nice Edgar!
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Wed 25 May, 2011 05:23 pm
at last free my dears
the grease is in my gears
and i roll on alone

when they look for me
then they quickly will see
he is the man thats gone
ossobuco
 
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Reply Wed 25 May, 2011 06:45 pm
@edgarblythe,
And many happy returns..
ossobuco
 
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Reply Wed 25 May, 2011 06:56 pm
@ossobuco,
Walking the flat wet sand
waves slink up to your feet,
toes squish slushing, and
digging heels do not meet
fading footsteps on the strand.
jjorge
 
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Reply Thu 26 May, 2011 03:08 pm
@edgarblythe,
roll on, roll on
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jjorge
 
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Reply Thu 26 May, 2011 03:09 pm
@ossobuco,
very nice, evocative
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spikepipsqueak
 
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Reply Thu 26 May, 2011 06:38 pm
@edgarblythe,
Retiring, Edgar?

Mr. Green Yaaaaayy!
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Thu 26 May, 2011 07:13 pm
@spikepipsqueak,
As a matter of fact, I am working as hard as I did before going into semi retirement. Smile
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Wed 1 Jun, 2011 04:17 pm
i wish to again see you
in this or any other milieu
cork or can or bijou
not finished yet i need you
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