Glory
 
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Reply Tue 30 Jan, 2007 10:36 pm
Innocent and sweet
Then craving meat
Harmless and careful
Then vicious and deceatful
Steriotypical pitbull

They see a flash without reality
Like taking drugs it changes their personallity
They become vicious
in a ridiculous state
And manipulates a tussle
Then penetrates bones n muscle

Easily sidetracked
Annoyance determines attack
Adolesent or adult
Assaulted or insulted
Either way you'll wish you bolted

Ripping skin, fat or thin
Targetted you hes moving in
dog's solivor and breath
Ripping your flesh
Thats why they so reputed
And thats why they get executed
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theprofessor
 
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Reply Wed 31 Jan, 2007 03:02 am
PLEASE READ AND RATE THANKS



hi for those who dont know im currently battle rapping two other paitrons of the battle syndicate they have called me out for a two on one and i would appreciate it if you would rate please and thank you




Glory wrote:
Well one of these whack bitches that worships you
DID and u probly told em too.. as i already stated dipshit

Your a poet so go write your peotry cause rap battling ain't your forte



"E-equals-M-C-Squared"

"me-equals-these-MC's-Scared"

my "rhymes-have-art-official-intteligence"

u never speak on your "own"

your "minds-have-artificial-intteligence"

wire taps attached to your "microphone"

the way i "diss-basterds"

causes natural "disasters"

you "say-you-flow"

i "piss-faster"

"thats-why-they-say-you-slow"

"you-suck"

"thats-why-they-say-you-blow"

"you-fuc"

with my "virtue's"

an i will "hurt-you"

the way you two on my back like a "shirt-dude"

here's the story of glory and "blazer"

you could'nt shock "if-you-were-a-tazer"

you couldnt cut me"if-you-were-a-razor"

when your pants around ur ankles male"masterbaters"

from this angle looks like these males have"mastered-vaders"

these"guys-talk-about-wordplay-and-useing-guns"

"i-talk-about-wordplay-and-useing-puns"

look at these two i"had-em-deceived"

as the serpent did to"adam-an-eve"

i"had-em-believe"

i wasn't sick, so i take the mix"add-in-disease"

cmon try an"end-me"my"mouths-sharp"

end up like"kenny"from"south-park"

im posting this in the rap battle section and the poetry section to get rateings


peace from the professor enjoy and rate please
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Fri 2 Feb, 2007 06:54 pm
He sat toasting marshmallows
Over a burning corpse.
They'd together faced battles
Where one's character morphs.
He looked for angel nurses
At first but soon sat down.
The flames defied his curses;
He toasted them black-brown.

He ate, burning his poor tongue,
Wished his friend lasting peace,
Who had coughed up his lung.
He'd witnessed the release;
No more was to be gathered;
He packed away his gear.
And not that it really mattered,
At last the nurse appeared.
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jjorge
 
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Reply Thu 8 Feb, 2007 09:21 am
edgarblythe wrote:
He sat toasting marshmallows
Over a burning corpse.



That's arresting imagery Edgar!
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Thu 8 Feb, 2007 06:08 pm
I figured I would get crucified for writing that. It wasn't a malicious thing, however.
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jjorge
 
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Reply Thu 8 Feb, 2007 08:30 pm
Edgar, I said arresting imagery, not 'grounds for arrest.' Smile
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Thu 8 Feb, 2007 08:36 pm
jjorge wrote:
Edgar, I said arresting imagery, not 'grounds for arrest.' Smile


Understood, jjorge. I referred to "others."
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Fri 16 Feb, 2007 06:30 am
If I had known God was a Texan,
I'd have moved there long ago.
For a hand that moves the mountains,
He's the only one I know.

Let's move to Texas,
To be a player in the show.
Get us down to Texas.
Be bigger than a minnow.

And he spreads all that shock and awe
In the hearts around the world.
Stands higher than the manmade law
Makes the straightest hair to curl.

So let's move to Texas,
Let's be a player in the show.
Get us down to Texas;
Only costs the kids you grow.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sat 17 Feb, 2007 09:59 am
is there anything new
or is the sky only blue
searching every heart
and every growing part
what if the stones tell us all
the shrouds of mystery fall
or the darkness takes it away
a day becomes just another day
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Cobbler
 
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Reply Tue 20 Feb, 2007 04:51 pm
Hey guys. It's Bawb; my other account flipped out on me!

Play hide and seek,
Among fireflies,
And when they're done,
Wait for the smells,
Of momma's pumpkin pies..
All watched intently by their,
Gentle innocent eyes,

All tucked in for bed at night,
The little boy blue, their favorite story,
Dad don't forget their little night light,
And their favorite blanket, to take away the fright,
Of the evil world,
That's haunting them,
Of the devestation hurled,
At their minds when
They can't take it, yet..
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edgarblythe
 
  1  
Reply Tue 20 Feb, 2007 10:15 pm
Yo, bawbler. Good to see ya back.
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Cobbler
 
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Reply Tue 20 Feb, 2007 10:26 pm
Thanks Smile . Nice to see you'all again.
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Cobbler
 
  1  
Reply Thu 22 Feb, 2007 09:27 pm
As I trudge away from here,
Into the windy mountain's drear,
And say my last short line of prayer,
To the only one who still holds me dear,
I will still carry my cross up there,
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Cobbler
 
  1  
Reply Thu 22 Feb, 2007 09:54 pm
The transformation of the un-open to interpretation population,
Resulting in excruciating generalized excommunication,
And manifestation of racial discrimination,
All to try and build a "pure" foundation,
So there's no room left for investigation,



Man! I hate this poem. But I've never rhymed that many things at once, so I thought I would post it.
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Leahln
 
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Reply Thu 22 Feb, 2007 10:48 pm
Hmm....
I want to take it all away,
the pain and all the sadness.
So you can have the life you want,
away from all this madness.

I'll do my best to help you through,
I hope my best will be enough.
Just try and stay together,
I know all this is rough.

Could I ease the pain you have,
and give you a new start?
I'll take away your burdens,
and your heavy heart.

Don't wander away,
I'll always be here.
To catch every,
single tear.
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Leahln
 
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Reply Thu 22 Feb, 2007 10:50 pm
Hmmm again
I wish that you would see,
how much I really care.
I'd do anything for you,
take you anywhere.

Can't you see the message hidden in this rhyme?
I hear your voice all day, time after time.

Hoping like everyone says,
maybe you'll love me too.
But why can't you see?
All I want is you.

Can't you see the longing look in my eyes?
You're smile is like 10,000 blue skies.

My love is clear,
My heart is true.
Please understand.
I. Love. You.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sat 24 Feb, 2007 10:04 am
Hi, LeahIn. Nice entry. Hope to see more of you around here.
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aidan
 
  1  
Reply Thu 1 Mar, 2007 03:14 pm
Exchanges (stream of consciousness)
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Bohne
 
  1  
Reply Tue 6 Mar, 2007 04:43 am
I think it's time again for me...
Stick my head through the door
Say: What are you waiting for
You're not going to offer me tea?

A beer would not be wrong either
A cider would be bliss
But I'll give the hard stuff a miss
And don't want coffee neither.

What have you all been up to?
Done anything great these days?
Me, I've been all over the place
So for a while let me sit with you!
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Tue 6 Mar, 2007 05:53 am
Same old same old, bohne. Good to see you stopping in.
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