Spontaneous Poems

Professor

The poem's greatly valued - many thanks

You wrote:


I read that and feel stronger, knowing I'm not really alone with this ****

Peace
Endy

Professor, you have lots of good stuff to say. Hope you keep it up.

i shall edgar , with life's inspirations an uniquely uplifting downfalls

just another one for my dear friends an poetic minds of art official intteligence

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inquisition , intuition
in position, telepathicly dip in to ur mind fishin
im wishin
to see with clarity
like looking through a wall an say there it be
the treasure
at what cost
what measure
it took to find what got lost
in the oceans which turned to a dessert
shifting tectonic plate's an the dirt still lies
fillid with hydration an oasis fertilized
a whirlwind
swirls spins
made of sand
blade of man
betrayed his hand
unable to hold on in such weather
with so much force it cuts leather
but all endeavors come to end
severed condemned
waiting for the reaper to come to them
who blind follow
and find there pride so easy to swallow
sleazy an hallow
although i know we all lie
all i
know
is when i fall die
go
fall inside
my hole
it wont be a dark place
it'll be where my hearts placed
in a mirror my hearts faced
in case, i get in trouble
sin grace, it will double
to twice the height and length
cant fight the strength
the light divides
my passion
half of me takes life in strides
the other comes crashin
one doesnt need help
the other keeps asking

Life long goals should be set as a transition
Never settle for 2nd best always steer for pole position
Relying on another persons input is stupid, dont listen!
Even if you ain't the sharpest knife in the kitchen
with 1 life always strive to complete your minds ambitions

i use a microphone with no off switch
first invade your ears then ur optics
whether it's on the radio or the computer in ya office
religon sex an war the three most contreversial topics
can bring sad
to get mad
the happiest
stolen of happyness
or those who dodnt believe in fate
standing next to adam an eve at heaven gates
and arches
the miltant in hell marches
towards the ocean where noah's arc is
battle within darkness'
battle with sin the darkest
forever humans searching for answers
consumeing the serpents cancer
ruins of pompei
tombs in the paths of bombs lay
life's black an white doom's gray
covered im smoke on dooms day
im a freedom writer
in the path of wreckoning a freedom fighter
watched soul's prison'd
jail divides colours like prism's
but the light is made of a rainbow
fighting the storm rain blows
rain flows
like tears
as pain grows
like years
brain's show
fear
knowing what goes up must come down
what starts must end
what goes around comes around
cut hearts must mend
and the end is now
with so few years left
you cant hear deaf
but who cares so near death

every good romance starts with a kiss
an a favorite song
to which u dance in bliss
savour it all night long
remember when i met ya
my heart rendered senseless over how to get ya
let ya know i care
flowing with ya golden hair
looking at your body holden air
an my knee's nearly folden there
with you i play no games an no antics
but hey you no my name romantic
romeo
this juliets the only one who know's me yo
she hasn't fooled me yet but she stole my gold
like im a leprachaun
you got pull on me like a leverage arm
an im no average charm
no savage makeing sure you feel no harm
you wanna have kids on yo farm
watchin them run with the horses
sounds like fun when your done with your courses
and travel a bit
an im done with the judge's gavil an ****
i'll buy you that white gold ring
in the night your hand im holding
we will have lover's eye's
and i know lovers cry
but these are tears of happyness
when we feel the butterfly's
we feel happiest

TrutH™
Just bored

Why does it seem I ACE this game, although I dont know JACK//
People call me a JOKER, cos knowledge of self is what I lack//
I dont rap about CLUBS, women, guns and a knife//
I spit realistic views of how I perceive life//
I dig through the earth with a SPADE in hope to find DIAMONDS//
I look at the highest mountains with the urge to one day climb it//
Cos maybe it was another being that gave me the gift to sing//
With the intentions and hopes that I would one day be KING//
But with one mistake everything I want could just fall apart//
Because the QUEEN I once loved proceeded to break my HEART//

seen through deception its a one way mirror
one way's fear
one way's years
of life's past
life's fast
filled with broken arms an stabwounds from a knife's gash
ages
of pages
rage is
nothing but locked cages
no key
flow free
when im fourty
i'll surpass the third dimension an go 4 d
liven
like its my only chance given
pedal to the metal driven
by ambition
intuition
verbal ammunition
nouns an verbs fall into position
like domino's chain reaction
brains reaction
within the hemisphere's
is to know the end is near
no the end is here

I LIKE this one Edgar! I can imagine Eartha Kitt singing it.

I'd change the title though, call it 'Hot Christmas'

jjorge
You have made my Christmas season brighter. Thank you.

Have a hot Christmas my friend!

i saw life for what it was
a false sense of security because
the learning curve's a straight line
with the force of gravity an weight its incline
can seem out of sight through the treacherous climb
it can bring out the fight through the trenches of time
as blood drenches the mind
in a carnivourus bloodlust
in the veins adreneline sent with blood rushed
to the brain
to cover the sorrow through the pain
the fluid delivered to ya frame
by nanotechnology an cyber medic's
human phycology of man cybernetic
when i rhyme my ciphers prophetic
no
i take my time ,my ciphers poetic
flow

key style
I segrigate the system prosperity ill use clarity to damage any Faker who wants to battle-me/

On the streets after they lose they try to smack-me, now im on the internet yo they try to hack-me, i spit ill **** that will make ur face form acne, everytime i spit a line the crowd says 'exactly',incredible untouchable pieces off my 16 cyclinder brain, if this was a race it'd be like u were walkin and i was in a jet fighter plane/

I'm like shrinks, i can tell if your whack its in my basic instincts//
key-style, walkin around my brain and lookin around/
I'm seeing words and just, writing em down/

Don't know about spitting licks
Don't know about turning tricks
But I know it's not a battle
Holding a gun to cattle

So I rest my loaded barrel
And elevate beyond this quarrel
See no need to waste a shot
On something you haven't got

In our mind,
Where the rhyme we create,
With the words we combine,
Is formed, our personal "chime",
Of the rhythm of our hearts to mankind,
Use our mind,
To let the emotion,
That dwells deep within the abyss,
The sense of calm, and peace,
Thoughts to release,
The entire reason that we exist,

please rate thank you everyone



who what when where why n how

who is he
who is she
who is that
who is skinny
who is fat
who is an inny
who is outie
who are you to doubt me



what makes u so great
what take's you so long, your always late
what is life
what is stirife
what is bad
what is good
what is sad
what should

i do

when you change
when did you become so strange
when did this come to be
when did you come to me
when will we be free


when

then

becomes where

where have you gone
where dusk's turn to dawn
where right's become wrong
where are the fallen men
where is the start
where is the end
where is the heart

why are you so
why dont you know
why cant you grow
why is it like this
why are we made in his likeness
why are we here
why do we fear
why do these eyes tear
why is death so near
why is there a new year

how is it
how come death visit's
how come death doesn't stay
how come for life we have to pay
how am i still alive
how did i survive
how come
hows done

Pretty good for a spontaneous poem.

Do you ever try non-spontaneous poems?

ie. taking plenty of time to rework a line,
or leaving a poem half-done for a time
waiting for the right word or phrase to
come to you to complete it?

'Then and Now'



....young and reckless

....old and feckless

Love Story


the you
of you.


the woo
of you.


the rue
of you.