Spontaneous Poems

You are welcome to do so, without notifying me, aidan. I trust your judgement, plus, I don't mind if they get out to other readers.

I cannot objectively view my new work. If it's good or bad, I need to let it lie a few months or longer.

Found the Lord,
No longer lost,
Him I adore,
At any cost

The poems I've posted up here are not actually poems. ( Most anyways. ), they are lyrics to songs I write. That might be why some of them have awkward rhyming..because It is different in the song.


Hear the Divine,
That beautiful Hymn,
Just a matter of time,
Until we are with Him,

Seeing the light,
That we so humbly adore,
Casts out the night,
Need nothing more,

Hear our call,
Please listen to us,
Hear us all,
????

I too write lyrics. I know what you are saying.

Cool. I really respect you, Edgar.


Wish this cold would go away,
Just wants to ruin my day,
When I want to go and play,
This cold comes back to block my way,

My nephew Nathaniel told me about his cat he has who he thinks is famous. He inspired me. He's starting kindergarten in September - I hope it doesn't turn out like this for him.

The Famous Cat

I hope you persevere always, from now on, aidan. And, when you get published we definitely want to know.

Thanks for the encouragement. I appreciate it.

youre ripe as an apple in a stores bin
and your treasures so ample
oh hold me my friend
the rite of love is to begin

hear sounds in the street birds the soft wind
as the smile on your face
meets my happy grin
veil on the floor i lock you in

fireflies pelting the night the crickets din
bold moonbeam on the floor
hold me closer my friend
for this night must never end

the more honor you heap on bush
the moroner you get

Elodie's mother whispers
love to the air
and bows her dark head
in awe.
At once pious
and joyful she lifts
her child's name in prayer-
a psalm of
pure praise for this
daughter who came to her-
a late gift-
small longed for bliss
eyes like water and soft
and soft smiles like water -
and light
she had forgotten.

When somebody other than myself posts, I often wait a while to respond, the thinking being that members tired of seeing my work will tune in to see what others have wrought.

i love the lillies in the sea
i love the hearth as it beckons to me
but i love heather more than all i know
i forgive the ones who laid me low
if ever you weep for the fallen man
step across me forget about old dan
for i lived as i loved with a peaceful heart
and willingly go and soon depart
heather my dove go on and say good bye
let no shadow or pain roll out from your eye

Julie does a grand job of apeing Kathy Burke



"Juwanna dance, love?" she said
Her eyes were green and her dress was red
"Naaah," I heard him say, "but I'd take you to bed, anyday."
That's when his pint went over his head
Here's what his girlfriend Julie said:
(Before she left)
"Wots 'e fink.... I'm fuc king deaf?"


(boy, she was scary)

But Endy, why was she scary?
She sounds sensible and smart
She knows her own mind, follows her own heart

The only thing she did that I find a little naff
is she wasted the whole pint on him-
she should have drank half.

(Who's Kathy Burke by the way?)

Kathy's an actress

if you ever get the chance - watch 'Once Upon A Time In The Midlands' (Brit film)
honest....... it'll answer all your questions
I think its directed by someone called Shaun Meadows

You might know Kathy from the film 'Elizabeth' (The Kate Blanchet version)
Kathy played Queen Mary (the catholic Queen)?

She's actually (in her brit stuff) more funny than scary, and her characters are often so honest and down-to-earth that she kind of makes you glad to be human. Watching her lay into a car with a baseball bat does make you kinda nervous - but you understand her motive completely.

Julie's a bit like that too.

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Don't know what's up with me tonight, feeling happy about nothing
Heres a little poem


Love poem

I'm lying here
Looking at the moon
So sad
You had to leave so soon
With the earth at my back
And the sky above
I think about life
And dream about love
I hope, with a smile
That you come back soon
I'm watching the night
And I'm missing you

When they step all over me,
Please let them be,
They know not what they do,

When they spit in my face,
And call me a disgrace,
They know not what they do,

But their time is running out,
They don't have a clue,
Dont just stand about,
Their is work to do,

Arguing amongst arguers,
Speaking till the star sets,
Marching along the mind-made,
Grounds are not gained and
Confusing are the calls,

Question the Queen of Questions...