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Oh lovely angel to be

 
 
jugbo
 
Reply Sun 5 Oct, 2003 12:26 pm
I wrote this for my 2-year old daughter the other day. What do you think?

Oh lovely angel to be
So prancy and fancy
Most like your mommy
And a little of me

What perfect spell are you
So happy and free
Like dandelion fluff
On an invisible sea

Blonde little pumpkin
Sweet as the breeze
What wishes hide in you
Inside that smiley head

Your daddy so loves you
As much as the sky is blue
And forever and ever
More than anyone has said
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Montana
 
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Reply Sun 5 Oct, 2003 01:28 pm
That's beautiful Jugbo :-D
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sozobe
 
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Reply Sun 5 Oct, 2003 01:54 pm
Aw, that's wonderful! Reminds me of my own almost-3-yr-old.
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