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Breathing again

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You let me mirror my dirty body in your sight
You knew that only in this way
The prayer will revive in me.

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Hi, Floris and welcome to A2K. Three very powerful lines in your piece. I think perhaps that you meant to say "mirror" but maybe not. Keep it up, Floris.

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Re: Breathing again
Thank you Letty for all you said. And yes, I wanted to write "mirror" not "mirrored", so I made the modification.

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