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A Poem for My Gal!

 
 
Reply Wed 1 Oct, 2003 06:26 pm
I hate that girl!
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colorbook
 
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Reply Wed 1 Oct, 2003 07:59 pm
It's very nice...but what matters most is what the lady Gaela Brown thinks of it. If someone wrote something that nice about me, I would treasure it. (you should highlite the letters in her name in bold type)
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Child of the Light
 
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Reply Wed 1 Oct, 2003 08:28 pm
Yeah, i thought about doing that, but i would ruin the fun of figuring out that it spelled your name.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Wed 1 Oct, 2003 08:29 pm
Hmm...going for the Poe thing....however, if it is for your gal, the bold thingy might remove the mystery, but it would make it more personal, and clear. Chicks dig clear.
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Child of the Light
 
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Reply Wed 1 Oct, 2003 08:33 pm
Yeah, as soon as you told me that "code" I thought "I've gotta use that!"

And I'm still unCLEAR about if I'm gonna bold her name. HMMM
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Wed 1 Oct, 2003 08:52 pm
Let's see what the other wimmins think, but I say go for clarity.
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Child of the Light
 
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Reply Wed 1 Oct, 2003 08:55 pm
I will tell her that there is a "secret code", and to find it look at the 1st letter of 1st line , and 2nd blah blah blah. That way there is a suprise!
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colorbook
 
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Reply Wed 1 Oct, 2003 08:58 pm
cavfancier says
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but it would make it more personal, and clear. Chicks dig clear.


Instead of the bold type maybe you could use italics or different colorinstead
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Child of the Light
 
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Reply Wed 1 Oct, 2003 09:02 pm
I hate her
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colorbook
 
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Reply Fri 3 Oct, 2003 08:19 am
So, did you give her the poem yet? Let us know what she thought of it.
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Child of the Light
 
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Reply Fri 3 Oct, 2003 04:59 pm
She is dead to me.
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colorbook
 
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Reply Fri 3 Oct, 2003 09:48 pm
I'm glad she liked it...most women love this stuff...it's sweet when guys write poetry for their women.
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Child of the Light
 
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Reply Fri 3 Oct, 2003 09:51 pm
I hate her.
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