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Ancient Bones

 
 
cusick
 
Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2003 06:47 am
Chains of daisies
cover the door
to ancient bones within,

entombed in bands
of iron,
unsullied by the tools of
insidious plunderers,


coveters of by-gone
treasure from
long ago centuries
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farmerman
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2003 07:00 am
I like . i think that your story isnt finished yet. Youve got more to say on this, so lets hear it
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cusick
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2003 07:14 am
Thank you Farmerman. I will see what I can do.
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