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Ode To Yeats

 
 
cusick
 
Reply Sat 27 Sep, 2003 09:26 am
They walk the bogs and boreens
Himself and Synge,
sketching his thoughts on minute pads
As the fields of Conammoragh
stroll beneath their feet.

The pads he dicards to the
vagaries of the winds
To do with as they will,
Their message etched deep within.

He found everyone
of interest and charm.
No tale so boring or story farfetched
To hold his attention.

He was told of the mass fleeings
To the land of plenty,
Where gold littered the streets
And wondered at their return,
Until his eyes were tempted
To the lush green fields
Catching up to the mountains,
And he nodded.

He heard of the poverty and sadness.
The endless scratching
of soil for sustenance.
And he saw the beauty
As they tramped the
hills of conammoragh,
Himself stalwart,
dying Singe. Idea Idea
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Letty
 
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Reply Sat 27 Sep, 2003 09:52 am
cusick, I have grown to love Yeats over the years, and your tribute to him is lovely. "as the fields.....stroll beneath their feet" is particularly good.

Did you mean to end your poem with "the"?
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cusick
 
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Reply Sat 27 Sep, 2003 11:56 am
Thank you Letty. I wrote this long ago and have been told by some that grass doesn't stroll, others ,like you, liked it.
I have to hold my breath now wondering if you will get this or if it will go astray. I have put it in the quick reply just under your reply but I have learned that it might not go where I want it to.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sat 27 Sep, 2003 12:08 pm
Sorry, cusick. I didn't get any further message. Hmmm. Grass doesn't stroll, huh. Perhaps your other critics aren't familiar with metaphor. Smile Hey, they may not even be familiar with Yeats.. Razz
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