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could any of you guys rate my lyrics? tips? any good? you tell me xo

 
 
Reply Mon 5 Jan, 2009 12:50 pm
make love not war
come on babe, you know the score
keep the peace do whats best
listen to me, ignore the rest

self pity,
self hate
self destruction
am i too late?

(chorus)
is this really what you want
tell me what is the point
in this vicious circle goin round and round
your destroying yourself, your becoming unwound



any good?
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Mon 5 Jan, 2009 12:57 pm
I recommend that you search two sites for lyrics ratings. sharemylyrics.com and sellinglyrics. Both sites are free membership.
aimee2cakes
 
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Reply Mon 5 Jan, 2009 12:59 pm
@edgarblythe,
cheers! xo
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