1
   

Jozi in Spring

 
 
Reply Sun 21 Sep, 2003 06:17 pm
I wrote this poem about the city I live in the city I both love and hate, if you never been to it (Johannesburg SOuth Africa) then maybe this poem can help you imagine what it's like. Jozi is slang for johannesburg. Observatory is a suburb in Jo'burg, once very exclusice now a victim of Urban creep, Linksfield is a very exclusive rich suburb while Orange Gove is poorer suburb.

JOZI HEIGHTS

Grey dove soft clouds
wash the blue sky
an ocean flecked with silvertone foam.

Tranquil late Jozi afternoon
above an empty white Observatory Mansion
cleaner and brighter against the charcoal sky

Drops thick with purpose
run down the Winding Linksfiled Ridge roads
carrying bottle tops and Joint stubs
and last night's memories downhill
past the millionaire's steep slick driveways
to the bottom, to Orange Grove
Where young men and women battle
up wet steep roads
in old dented cars
the most popular colour white

White wet Mazda's, toyota's and volkswagens
they all glow in this dark brooding afternoon
luminous with drive
shining as they pass the more expensive homes.
  • Topic Stats
  • Top Replies
  • Link to this Topic
Type: Discussion • Score: 1 • Views: 564 • Replies: 2
No top replies

 
cusick
 
  1  
Reply Mon 22 Sep, 2003 11:50 am
I really like this as it is so different from where I live in England. Mostly grey skies and rain and when the sun shines there are grumbles that it is too hot. Greydove soft clouds sounds beautiful .Maggie
0 Replies
 
tagged lyricist
 
  1  
Reply Mon 22 Sep, 2003 02:03 pm
Thanks so much cusick! yeah South africa's climate is a little differnet to England... better i think Razz
0 Replies
 
 

Related Topics

What inspired you to write...discuss - Discussion by lostnsearching
It floated there..... - Discussion by Letty
Small Voices - Discussion by Endymion
Rockets Red Glare - Discussion by edgarblythe
Short Story: Wilkerson's Tank - Discussion by edgarblythe
The Virtual Storytellers Campfire - Discussion by cavfancier
1st Annual Able2Know Halloween Story Contest - Discussion by realjohnboy
Literary Agents (a resource for writers) - Discussion by Craven de Kere
 
  1. Forums
  2. » Jozi in Spring
Copyright © 2024 MadLab, LLC :: Terms of Service :: Privacy Policy :: Page generated in 0.03 seconds on 05/13/2024 at 05:58:31