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Some slam should be read out loud

 
 
Reply Sun 21 Sep, 2003 06:07 pm
The slam:

Minds twirl
ballerina's pink frills
the hulks green rage
emotions joint haze
spent like my last cent
feed absent Absinthe
memory disengage
I reach voice mail once agian
I alway seem to wander in
never really wanted...

I'd hang up but
cell phone's "end" is all i got
is it I party too hard that I feel lonely?
or is the quietness only self inflicted marajauna justice?
am i this
cos I smoke Cali Mist
and the next hits
just 200 rand a bag away
cos the Swazi just won't do today...

The chronics got more kick
and I'll be doing Jedi mind tricks
and i never get sick
only my emmotions are screwed
and what do I do?
consciuous propted
I dropped it
Pick a new habit:
paranoia, anxiety, laziness

God dam it
I pick another joint
beacuse the Swazi will
have do to day.

Well that's my poem tell me what you think? Razz
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Reply Sun 21 Sep, 2003 06:14 pm
Sounds like an ode to substance abuse. Other then that, you might want to run it through the spell checker to correct some of the typos. Smile
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Reply Sun 21 Sep, 2003 06:18 pm
yeah i'm lazy and connection slow i know there's mistakes but dam it you knwo what i mean don't you/
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