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Shades Of Autumn

 
 
cusick
 
Reply Sun 21 Sep, 2003 02:25 pm
Here goes. This is my first attempt.

My silent steps trespass
the soft Autumn meadow.


Nimbus clouds lean low
As my tears blend with the rain
washing the earth.

Doe’s she hear the Ave I breathe?
Will my soft words warm her?

Sleep in peace my love.
Soon the door will open
And by your side
I will slumber forever .
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Butrflynet
 
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Reply Sun 21 Sep, 2003 02:55 pm
Hi Cusick, welcome to A2K. You've stumbled into a denizen of writers with a wide range of experience.

Let us know if you have any questions or need help navigating through the halls here.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 21 Sep, 2003 03:11 pm
Hi, cusick
Good first try.
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cusick
 
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Reply Wed 24 Sep, 2003 07:04 am
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edgarblythe wrote:
Hi, cusick
Good first try.


Thank you. I have thanked you before but it must have gone astray. Could you tell me what is the difference between linls and text and how do I recognise them? I only see post. Oblige Maggie
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