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Thu 18 Sep, 2003 03:29 am
Sweet Fantasies
Flawless Desires
Unlimited Dreams
Wistful wishes
Relentless Efforts
Floating Hopes
Cruel Vicissitudes
Playful Fate
Unattainable Bliss
Vacant Eyes
Empty Hands
Endless Time
Unseizable Moments
Enslaved Soul
Impending Death
Mortal Me
Broken Everything!!!!
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menmyself. I really liked your poem. It's reminds me, somewhat, of a diamante. You begin with the ideal and end with the mortal.
Welcome to A2K, menmyself.
hey thanks for appreciating my write:)
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So many descriptive images. Great Maggie