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Everythings meant ot be broken-poem

 
 
Reply Thu 18 Sep, 2003 03:29 am
Sweet Fantasies
Flawless Desires
Unlimited Dreams
Wistful wishes
Relentless Efforts
Floating Hopes
Cruel Vicissitudes
Playful Fate
Unattainable Bliss
Vacant Eyes
Empty Hands
Endless Time
Unseizable Moments
Enslaved Soul
Impending Death
Mortal Me
Broken Everything!!!!


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Reply Thu 18 Sep, 2003 10:15 am
menmyself. I really liked your poem. It's reminds me, somewhat, of a diamante. You begin with the ideal and end with the mortal.

Welcome to A2K, menmyself.
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menmyself
 
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Reply Wed 24 Sep, 2003 05:09 am
hey thanks for appreciating my write:)
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Reply Wed 24 Sep, 2003 07:15 am
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So many descriptive images. Great Maggie
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