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Reading from my soul

 
 
floris
 
Reply Mon 15 Sep, 2003 04:50 am
The night is coming...
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Rose
 
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Reply Mon 15 Sep, 2003 08:35 pm
floris,
This is the saddest thing I have read here!
I do hope this is not you- in some lonely room waiting for someone you are sure is not coming.

If you know such a person, tell them: Love is gentle. It is not demanding and obsessive.
When people cross lines, they are usually the victim of their own hopeless obsession. Or-- they feel they have run out of alternatives.

Whatever... Your writing is dynamic... really makes your reader respond- one way or another.
But they cannot just IGNORE it. Great job.
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floris
 
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Reply Tue 16 Sep, 2003 01:41 am
Re: Reading from my soul
Rose, I know that "Reading from my soul" is a sad creation (if I can say in this way), but as I wrote: "I can not be happy all the time...". Life is so unforeseeable. And yes, you're right! Love must not be obsessive, my opinion too, so I have to tell you that I'm not talking about a love like this in "Reading from my soul". To be more precise: it's about an impossible love and one of lovers takes the decision to give up, is not so strong to fight for their love like the other and he/she left her/him. Because of this I said: "you'll never open that door", "I thought we gonna be together in the future...". And it's normal to be angry when you find that all your dreams are gone, it's normal to live a period with that person in your mind and heart: "my mind is torturing me, I'm hearing your voice second after second as an echo: "I love you, love you, love you...". But in the end that person has the power to let away all the pain and to try to live again: "I'm so tired...", "I need to sleepÂ… I must try to get you out of my head, ?'cause only in this way I'll breathe again".
It's about a strong and deep love, not about an obsessive love. But this is the charm when you write something: a person can understand something and another person can understand another thing. Different persons, differents opinions.
Thank you for all your thoughts. For me it's important every word.
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