OGIONIK
 
Reply Sat 9 Aug, 2008 11:17 pm
i dont know where i messed up
i dont know where i went wrong

to hide my true self
is like holding back a nuclear bomb

i thought i did good
i thought i did right

i tried me best
why cant i sleep at night?
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dadpad
 
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Reply Sat 9 Aug, 2008 11:19 pm
nice.
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OGIONIK
 
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Reply Sat 9 Aug, 2008 11:21 pm
ty..

ive been trying to write poetry for a long time. i figured why not just go at it.
screw the rules and stuff. just freestyle it
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Rockhead
 
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Reply Sat 9 Aug, 2008 11:26 pm
You've more balls than eye.

Can't tell ya why.

Go ahead and fly.

I'll pick you up if you fry...

(Poems born from Jack...)
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hawkeye10
 
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Reply Sat 9 Aug, 2008 11:26 pm
the title of the thread is cool
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OGIONIK
 
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Reply Sat 9 Aug, 2008 11:33 pm
i didnt really want anyone to read it lol..
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OGIONIK
 
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Reply Sat 9 Aug, 2008 11:42 pm
an animal trapped in a cage
surrounded by cannibals
who attack and exact their rage
that chapter is over
alas i cannot flip the page
ravenous and stabbed, stuck on a stage
for everyone to point laugh at my pain
i might crack, but thats not the way
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OGIONIK
 
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Reply Sun 10 Aug, 2008 01:01 pm
i was raised like dog,
in the streets..
i wasnt raised at all,
except by me..
kill or fall,
i chose to sleep..
i looked into the abyss


a little to deep..
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sozobe
 
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Reply Sun 10 Aug, 2008 03:34 pm
OGIONIK wrote:

i wasnt raised at all,
except by me..


This is good...
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