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Sun 14 Sep, 2003 04:24 pm
another to review
Winter has shed in her
Most clouds are clearing up now
The storms are more manageable
Fewer tolls are being extracted
My most valued charm
Is starting to shine once again
And pull away from the binding chain
What reason do I have to hold her
Now I see the storm for me
Growing heavy and lead-like on mass
Seeded with spoiled fantasy and dreams
Poisoned with the caretakers lot
The wing has healed and steady
The nest is comfortable but old
The ties are too binding for her wellness
And I turned from nursemaid to jailor
I like this one. You and
Floris make interesting use of the wing metaphor.
I like this one too, Jugbo - especially, as Letty said. the wing and nest metaphor...