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Sat 13 Sep, 2003 08:57 pm
please comment!
Through clutter and chaos
through worry and fever
such matters matter not
such fevered battles fought
Will cease and return peaceful to you
Every bill unpaid and forgotten
every call unreturned never
accidents are human
all but love not remain
after the storm of living passes with you
We lose our minds a little each day
we misplace our possessions often
and along with them repose
or at least we may think so
saving embraces by you are my treasure
We run on different time zones
we schedule unintentionally to miss
but always return home
together never alone
any sorrows will fail in the measure
Yes we live cluttered and baggaged lives
yes and often it is a chaotic whirlwind
tripping on toys, pets, shoes
swimming through baby blues
each the other's lifeguard and stay
When the world is baying at the door
when wind is blowing through the cracks
remember my arms are for you
and your arms are my rescue
through the remainder of our stormy way
My favorite lines were:
"We lose our minds a little each day "
"When the world is baying at the door
when wind is blowing through the cracks "
that reminds me of henry rollins and the spoken word hes released...good stuff.
thanks! Great compliments so far.
jugbo,
I think when you write, you are GIVING it away,
and it will fly where it will...
If it does some good, be glad.
Damn good.
Thanks for sharing.
Well I like it although i preffer the other poem returning home with spaghetti sauce but remeber i'm a beat junkie so that could be why, i also liked the simplicity of it yet the profoundenss of it.
Ypur a great poet and your work is definatley the best i've read so far.
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