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Venetia
 
Reply Tue 2 Sep, 2003 04:17 pm
I scare you because you see in my eyes the man you may become


You scare me because I see in your eyes the man you may not become
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Craven de Kere
 
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Reply Tue 2 Sep, 2003 04:19 pm
That is damn cool. Welcome to A2K btw!

I like the wordplay. It's one of those simple/clever ones.
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Venetia
 
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Reply Tue 2 Sep, 2003 04:22 pm
Thanks
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