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Rap for Fun!

 
 
Reply Thu 10 Apr, 2008 08:20 pm
Okay, how can you tell that i'm the best?
I can shoot you in the chest and pull the bullet out your neck,
now your a wreck,
so you better stay in check,
or imma seperate your bodies like a loaf of wheat bread,

My lyrics like a pitbull better go and grab a chain,
cause i bring flames, sustainin the pain in ya membrane,
im insane, and to walk you need a cane,
cause i crippled you all verbally as if my words hit like a train,

i only just started i aint leavin so soon,
im so complex i can kill you with a spoon,
if your lookin for a chorus better find another tune,
leave you with two black eyes like freakin racoon,

are you tired of me yet? are you gettin too full?
im so far ahead of the game you need a time capsule,
i aint no dmx but im bout to act a fool,
but damn, i gotta go cause im kinda late for school,

PCE

(fyi i havent killed anyone, but i thought it was a pretty cool line :p)
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Endymion
 
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Reply Thu 10 Apr, 2008 08:28 pm
Re: Rap for Fun!
skatemasta wrote:

im insane,


yeah, me too. Nurse Ratchett will be along with our medication any time soon.
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Endymion
 
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Reply Thu 10 Apr, 2008 08:33 pm
hey, just kidding - welcome to the site

here's the rap thread if you want it

http://www.able2know.org/forums/viewtopic.php?p=3183033#3183033

they're waiting for you, man
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skatemasta
 
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Reply Thu 10 Apr, 2008 09:00 pm
okay ty :p guess i posted rong one eh?
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Endymion
 
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Reply Thu 10 Apr, 2008 09:11 pm
post here whenever you want to (I'd read it)
you'd get better feedback there though if you're looking for a battle
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Tai Chi
 
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Reply Thu 10 Apr, 2008 09:37 pm
Endymion wrote:
post here whenever you want to (I'd read it)
you'd get better feedback there though if you're looking for a battle


I don't normally read the rap threads, so by posting here you might get a different audience (like me). I enjoyed your...er...rap? (I look at it as poetry, hope that's okay)...especially the "black eyes like...raccoon" and "so far ahead...you need a time capsule". (I'm old but willing to expand my horizons Very Happy )
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Trojchek
 
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Reply Mon 14 Apr, 2008 08:54 am
damn b, you lookin' at me,
like you wanna i.v.
of my see-men
when i see men
i act like i'm invincible
don't love no hoes, that's the principle
don't smoke sherm, but i dust a lot
pollinating coochies like my dick about to flop
yeah, like your record sales
didn't make enough to get your momma out on bail
on a shoplifting charge
this rap style's large
yours is petty
like tom and the heartbreakers

you got a butter knife, i got a machete
you're oliver twist and i'm j.p. getty
not gotti, you didn't hear me wrong
i'm too suburban to do a black frank white song
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sxkstyle
 
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Reply Thu 8 May, 2008 05:32 pm
aight
Those are pretty good

Yo the creation of my foundation
Is controlling the nation
Ask for salvation, then give us your location
other than that you aint gettin out alive
no matter how hard you strive
yo so dont steal rhymes from a quotation
I was born from ultraviolet radiation
I think you need some reabilitation
Cuz this misinterpretation
your personafacation
of what I'm saying
Dont be portraying
or playing
or you better start praying
cuz im conveying your surverying
what im trying to say
look out, your toupee is in dissaray
Now I'm lauging while you're graphing
a plan of escape
you think you're so cunning while you're running
boy get in shape
peace
battle back
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sxkstyle
 
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Reply Mon 12 May, 2008 02:37 pm
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bigpatch2
 
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Reply Wed 21 May, 2008 12:51 pm
Twisted Evil i dont care about the colour of your skin

ill still cut u up & put u in a bin

we all no im gonna win

because u r a fake just like just like a joke

ill come down there and make u choke

i might not smoke

but when i poke

you run to ur mum and then u start to croak Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil bigpatch2 brap
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sxkstyle
 
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Reply Wed 21 May, 2008 02:16 pm
bigpatch2 wrote:
Twisted Evil i dont care about the colour of your skin

ill still cut u up & put u in a bin

we all no im gonna win

because u r a fake just like just like a joke

ill come down there and make u choke

i might not smoke

but when i poke

you run to ur mum and then u start to croak Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil bigpatch2 brap


yo dog this the worst rap i ever heard
you trying to rap is just obsurd
"because u r a fake just like just like" a whatever
don't try to rap, not now, not ever
yo dude try rapping without sucking a cock
your raps sound like a retard with writers block
yo get stool off your tool and go back to middle school
cuz u rhyme like a fool

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http://www.able2know.org/forums/viewtopic.php?t=92575
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