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Sat 16 Feb, 2008 04:19 pm
Blessed and Impressed
We started out as acquaintances
Nothing much really happening
You were nice and you seemed to care
I thought our plans seemed pretty fair
I thought that I'd been,
Blessed and impressed
By your being
I think that I'm fallin
But please see
I'm fragile and torn
I ask you to be gentle with me
As the hours turned into days
I wondered if you felt the same
All I know is you made me smile
And I want you to stick around a while
I knew that I'd been
Blessed and impressed
By your scene
I know that I'm fallin
But please see
I'm fragile and torn
I ask you to be gentle with me
What if I said you are the most
Beautiful thing
Would you believe me?
And what if I said
You could mean everything to me?
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Its a little rough version so far and isn't quite finished
But it would be nice to know what people think?
And I know it can be hard figuring out how its sang and stuff
but you can always sing it in your own way? =)
Please comment
D.J. Welcome to A2K. I like your song, but it would be nice to know the key and the melody. Also, are you a man or a woman? Often, that does make a difference in feeling your lyrics. It will help, too, to distinguish between the verses, chorus and the bridge.
Hi & welcome....
I like your words too... words from the heart can never be judged by anyone, except you - but I can feel them - so keep writing and say what you feel! Your words sound heartfelt - that's gotta be a good thing - right?
Good Luck - keep going
Hey....
I am a girl
And this is my first attempt at ever writing a song
So I'm glad to hear some good feedback already =)
I don't really know how to show the key and stuff yet but when I do I'll update it =)
Thanks to those who replied
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Ditto on what Izzie said. I felt the words came from the heart. Those seem to be the best songs imo. Please do update the song when you are done. I would love to see it. Best of luck to you
I'd say just keep going, don't judge yourself to harshly and just keep listening to yourself and being creative.
Find your own voice.