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My 1st poem

 
 
Giannie
 
Reply Thu 7 Feb, 2008 06:00 am
I am too afraid to love

Worried that color will blind me

I've been living in the grey

Fear of hurt keeps me away


I've been living in my corner

I've eluded being an owner

Not to lose what I care most

I might in the world be lost


Forever put up a grim face

Smile might leave me in a daze

Scared of seeking more in life

To forever escape pain and grief


Shall I let go? Shall I love?

Has my time for joy come now?

Shall I run into the world?

See colors green, blue and gold?


Lie down on meadow green

See blue sky without a screen

Pick blossoms gold and cream

Shall I live my concealed dream?


Will I get hurt? Will I like what I get?
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Amigo
 
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Reply Fri 8 Feb, 2008 10:40 pm
Hey, I really like it. Good job.

I kind of feel like that.

Give us another one, even if it's not as good.
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