editing of passage meant for Grade 3 studemts

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Could someone please edit the passage meant for 3rd year students for me? Thank you very much.

One day, a little girl, Nicole, was walking back to her house and eating an ice cream at the same time. She did not notice there was a banana skin lying on the path. She stepped on it and had a great fall.

She cried, "Help! Help! My leg is bleeding! Someone, help me, please." But nobody was around. Nicole also had a wound on her knee.

Two or three minutes later, she could hardly get up on her knees and she was very sad. With much difficulty, she walked home. Soon her mother took her to a clinic. The doctor cleansed the wound and bandaged it. He also prescribed some medicine and ointment for her to apply on the wound. After Nicole's mother had paid the clinic assistant, they left for home.