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Poem I wrote: What do you think?

 
 
Reply Tue 8 Jan, 2008 06:12 pm
Tale of an Unsophisticated Nothing

By moi Cool



Hi!
I'm an Unsophisticated Nothing.
My favorite food is ghastly pie.
Only my family knows the recipie.
I wish I were a something
But I am a nothing and that is that
But oh,
How I long to be a something! Sad
Sad
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Reply Wed 9 Jan, 2008 02:15 pm
"Only my family knows the recipe."

I love that line!

Keep it up . . .
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