Coffee Girl(short poem)

I like this - it made me smile.

Thank you.
Its actually how I feel at the moment. So thats probably why its so good.

I enjoyed this poem quite a bit. I can see standing in the Starbucks line. Well done.

I am a fiction type, but enjoyed this. New to this forum, trying to review other's hoping for comments on my works (606 University parts I and II, Cody, and Flustrated)

Thank you Wylnes.
I will read some of your stuff since you were so kind enough to read mine.

I like this one quite a lot.

It's very brief, yet it says a lot and actually does give a mental image, even though so short.

I like this.....

I think almost every man on this planet has experienced a similar situation in his life.

Who is your actual coffee girl??? :wink: