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revised form, please r&r. tell me what one you like best!!

 
 
Reply Mon 10 Dec, 2007 04:36 pm
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like a petal falling to the ground,
so do my tears fall for you
days gone by,
smiles wasted.
i long for you.
like a lone flower surrounded by water,
slowly dying, wasting away
i long to be wasted away,
forgotten.
Cool waters gently ripple against moon showered shores,
high above, blanketed in wispy night's darkness,
a lone star shines.
wide eyes gaze up, heart slowly beating.
a silent whisper comes forth,
a wish, a fleeting hope.
will you answer my call?
golden lights brighten the horizon
darkness faces, the star is gone.
the golden eye rises to its throne on high,
still petals continue to fall.

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like a petal falling to the ground,
so do my tears fall for you
days gone by, smiles wasted.
i long for you to answer my call
like a lone flower surrounded by water,
slowly dying, wasting away
so do i long to be wasted away,
simply forgotten.
Cool waters gently ripple against moon showered shores,
high above, blanketed in wispy night's darkness,
a lone star shines.
i gaze up, eyes wide, heart slowly beating.
a silent whisper comes forth,
a wish, a fleeting hope.
will you answer my call?
golden lights brighten the horizon
darkness faces, the star is gone.
the golden eye rises to its throne on high,
another day to wait,
another day to send forth a smile
another day to call.
will this be the day?
will you answer my wish?
time will only tell.
until then petals continue to fall.
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Reply Mon 10 Dec, 2007 06:00 pm
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like petals falling,
my tears are for you,
days gone by, smiles wasted,
i long for what we had.

cool waters, rippled shores,
a lone star shines.
eyes gaze up, heart slowly beating.
silent whisper comes forth,
a wish, a fleeting hope,
will you answer my call?

horizon brightens, darkness faces,
star is gone.
golden eye rises high,
still, petals fall.
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