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Sun 9 Dec, 2007 01:24 am
Whats it like when everyone wants you?
I watch as you bask
in light that surrounds you
It must be busy in there?
It must be confusing in there?
Is it overwhelming in there?
Everybody claps for you
We watch
We all want to be you, be with you
It must be busy in there?
It must be confusing in there?
Is it overwhelming in there?
Do you feel like you might explode
If you don't get some air?
Is that light you bask in just a glare?
All you really want is somebody to care?
Is anyone there?
Are you there?
hey, i'd been thinking about John Lennon (shot 27 years ago yesterday) and happened to look here after i posted something on him. Read this and thought blimey - this could be about Lennon (although i'm sure it's not)- it made me think of him again - in a different way.
I think this is very good btw - hope to see more of your poems
Thanks Endymion for taking the time to read and also comment on my poem. I like how you connected it with your thoughts on Lennon!
Cheers!
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