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Soldier

 
 
Reply Wed 20 Aug, 2003 08:12 pm
hanging here like the unavailing catch of the day
captured in a raid on the east bank
all emotions hidden
they see the face of stone
like jesus on his cross
my job, protect a world filled with obfuscation
finding peace in the middle of turmoile
freeing hate, feeling no pain
the torture continues but I can not be broken

It has been three weeks since I seen light
my body is at war
my mind is silent
I know my brothers will come
they always do
I am a son of god
but earth is my heaven
look at my blood as it soaks my jacket like a warm rivers currant
I am willing to die for my country
for my people
I am a special forces soldier
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THe ReDHoRN
 
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Reply Wed 20 Aug, 2003 11:49 pm
Excuse me for being naieve but is the world really that bad?
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LibertyD
 
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Reply Wed 20 Aug, 2003 11:52 pm
Maybe he really is a soldier.

And in this day and age for a soldier, I can only imagine that it would indeed be that bad.
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safecracker
 
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Reply Wed 20 Aug, 2003 11:52 pm
Yes
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Thu 21 Aug, 2003 05:41 am
safecracker, I feel for you...an evocative image of what you know.
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 21 Aug, 2003 04:45 pm
safecracker, There is really no way to feel another's pain, but I can identify with what you have said through a certain empathy.

All we can do here is stand and look...

Red, naive? No! It's called the courage of the young.
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