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Wed 20 Aug, 2003 04:26 am
I wish I were a stethoscope, listen to her words furtively. Understand her deliberate demeanour. Torment meets my wistfulness which overwhelms me. My indelible infatuation with her goes incessantly without a nuance. Still being indefatigable?
Gruelling, my feelings strife turn into an ambivalence state when an involution brings me to the brink of derangement or maybe to the zenith of joy? A contradiction or merely transience? Hard to conceive, hard to solve. What is the upshot? Who should I opt for?
Tell me if you see any grammatical mistakes. Thanks.
A stethoscope is no good without a good ear. c.i.
Why the large vocabulary? What seems to be the message? No offense but do me a favor and write about a dictionary...I actually liked the poem! GEEZUZ I wish I had a stethoscope!
Nice work!!!!
Why "involution?" Fifty percent of your readers will not understand the word. How about "I wish I were a stethoscope. Listen to her words furtively." c.i.
Involution~Involvement
Alluding the involvement of the third person
you learn a new word if you read it we expand our vocab in many ways reading is 1 of them, I knew what it meant but either wqay I like it.
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