Which do you prefer

i would like to know which of the following two intros you like best.
and would like any advice you can give on both.

thank you!!! sophie

I'm Alice, I didn't write this book, I merely stepped into my best friends' room and pleaded to god that he'd bring her back. My tears fell on her pillow, my lip quivered, my hands shook and as I opened my eyes and focused on her bookcase, that's when I saw it. Her diary. I forced myself up from the bed, my unwillingness was not because I didn't really want to get up or couldn't be bothered. My unwillingness came from wanting to just lay there and hope that I die too. So that I could be with her again. As I started to read the diary my eyes widened, my heart thumped within my chest. I held it tightly and I just ran. I ran so fast my legs burned with pain and my lungs almost burst. For inside the diary was my soul and hers in cased together. I found this when I finally got the guts up to venture into her room, at 23, 6 years after her death, she was 18 and this…
This is my life.




"I'm Alice, but I didn't write this. I merely stepped into my best friend's room, praying for her return. Tears fell on her pillow; lips quivering, hands shaking, I saw her diary on the bookcase. I stayed on the bed, praying that I'd die too so we could once more be together. I tried to read her diary with wide-opened moist eyes, but I had to run away with it clutched tightly to my heart thumping chest-for inside was bled as one the souls of hers and mine. She was a year my senior when she died at 18, and now at 23 I finally found the courage to enter her room."