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Does a Wrong make a Right?

 
 
Reply Wed 14 Nov, 2007 12:24 am
One bright day

in the middle of the night

i made the wrong choice

and it turned out right

i was filled with joy

so very sad

i was cool and calm

but really mad

i hurt ur feelings

with a compliment

i lost all my manners

but was still a gent

i bragged about myself

when i was lowly and humble

i stood tall

even as i stumbled

i screamed out loud

as i kept my mouth shut

my wound healed

as an open cut

i looked around

staring dead ahead

i was full of life

but completely dead

im gonna start a new life

i cant go on

i reached out to find u

but u were gone

its a peaceful life

a total rat race

im gonna stay here forever

i gotta get out of this place

i want total destruction

just some harmony

i would stay and fight

as i would flee

it think of the future

way back in the past

im dying so slow

losing life so fast

im my very own enemy

my very best friend

lets go back to the beginning

right here at the end
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Reply Wed 14 Nov, 2007 04:23 am
I like it.
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