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Pablo Cortisone And The Faeces Of Eight (Part One)

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acefreemok
 
Reply Wed 7 Nov, 2007 04:54 pm
I'm interested in feedback about the following piece...
It actually an excerpt from my novel Kafe Gavani which is serialised online at Edit: Moderator: Link removedEdit: Moderator: Link removed
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Reply Thu 8 Nov, 2007 12:42 am
You are too concerned with effect.
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