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Reply Mon 18 Aug, 2003 12:42 pm
Love is always open arms
With arms open you allow love to come and go as it wills
freely, for it will do so anyway
If you close your arms about love you'll find you are left only holding yourself
to only have yourself in the end
pain
as i feel it
as i think
why have i lived this way
why is everything not for me
who is with me
who is there forever
are you gonna be that one
can you promise
to be there
to want me
i never kept a promise
but i will for you
i promise
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Reply Mon 18 Aug, 2003 02:40 pm
Looks like you've got a lot to say, safecracker. It's great to see you posting original work.

Making a promise. <<nodding>> That's hard personal work.
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