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These feelings that got me

 
 
Reply Mon 11 Aug, 2003 10:27 pm
Its so hard to denie these feelings
Knowing deep inside that i feel this way.
It scares me, Makes me wonder,
That even though you're miles away
My mind remains close to you.
And when doubt decides to cross my mind,
Inside i know that you FELL and FEEL this too.

Its strange how we rarely speak
Yet on those late nights i hear all the words you say.
Hearing you in my thoughts is comforting,
It reminds me that you're here to stay.
Who would have thought you'd be all i miss,
When we're yet to see face to face.
Yet somehow you're the only one whos gotten me like this.
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Reply Tue 12 Aug, 2003 05:54 am
Welcome to A2K,Misteriosa. I felt your poem. Its theme is centuries old, but you managed to put that theme in a fresh light. Hope you keep writing.
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